Portfolios

name: alyssa Schukar
General focus: photo j
3 problems: it was a sowner, some pictures could have been done better, needs more emotion
2likes: man sweepin the street, girl who feel over hurtals
over all impression: seemed kinda sad

Name: Travis Haughton
General focus little kids
3 problems: picture of back of the head, picture of sign, picture of kid wearing mask
2 likes: picture of girl in church, basketball shot
over all impression: needs more

Name: Nick Adams
General focus: photo j
3 problems: kids with disabilites, bad frame fo the football player layin down, piture of girl sittin on the swing
2 Likes: photo of man jumping in air, girl with birds
over all impression: it was random


Name: Josh Birnbaum
General focus: sports
3 problems: kid pictures, pictures with no emotion, content of portfolio,
2 likes: photo of people palying with flower and paint, photo of girl gettin kicked in the face while playin soccar.
over all impression: good

Dustin snipes
the notes strengths were he had good pictures, got a picture of everyone doin something, wicture with moments.
the noted weakness, what that he used photo shop.
i saw strengths that this guy goes in the middle of it to get his shot and he find emotion.
i couldnt find any weeknesses.

contest recap
They went through many phots argueing and puttin in their own opinions on it. Tryin to find a portfolio on diversity and good photos all the way through. and even though the winner had all sports it was the best one.

Individual Images
i agree that the photo with rugbee players that it should be in number one spot. its a photo of players and the guy with the ball is getting chased, and the man holdin the ball has anoter player grabbing him and it looks as if his fingure is in his eye. it has good emiotion.

i disagree with the photo of the hocky players gettin second place. Because there could be more. what happened after the player got hit? u dont see and of their faces. the boxing player photo should have came in second.